My new soundtrack !!!!

Revision en2, by Mohinem, 2017-10-11 03:24:36

Hello everyone.... this is off-topic, but I made a remake of the Shakira song 'Chantaje'. Please tell me what should I improve upon the song ?

Below is the link —

https://soundcloud.com/mohinem-rap-master/chantaje-remake

Thanks everyone !

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